17A: Elevator Pitch Number Two
Reflection on Feedback:
For the most part, my feedback was what I expected. Most people experience these issues and see my business idea as a solution to a very common problem. I didn't realize I did it until after I posted the video and we reviewed some people's elevator pitches in class, but I did introduce myself and say my name, which I fixed in this video. I think everything went smoothly and I made improvements within this elevator pitch.
Kasey, great improvements of your elevator pitch. You stated the problem, how your business idea works, and how it will solve the problem. In addition, I believe that the convenience BikeShare would bring to the University of Florida will be unmatchable. I love that BikeShare will be located at different places on campus which would make it a lot easier for customers.
ReplyDeleteHello again Kasey! Hope your weekend is doing good. I can see that you corrected the flaws that your last elevator pitch had and made some improvements that resulted really well. On a short period of time, you clarify what the original problem is, your idea, and how it can solve this problem. Great job one again, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Kasey! I hope you had a nice weekend and that you are doing well. You did a great job on this elevator pitch, and it seems like the things you changed made it overall a better pitch. You effectively described all important aspects of your business, and it seems like if you used it in real life it would work! Great job.
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