Hello Kasey, I can say that I'm one of those persons who gets tickets often, and my bike was stolen 3 years ago. This is why I agree with you that this is a good idea. The idea of suing an app to access the bike is time-saving and easy. Overall, great job again, this is a truly innovative idea.
Hi Kasey - I hope you are well! You did a great job on this assignment - it is always interesting to put a name to the words on your blog! I thought you did a great job on your elevator pitch - the bike idea is super useful and would help out a lot of students on campus. I know that I always wish I had a bike - and I love the idea of the convenience. Good luck!
Kasey, I believe you elevator pitch was good. You introduced yourself and provided different situations where most of students have been in. As I said in previous posts, your idea delivers efficiency and convenience to all people and I am also shocked that the University of Florida does not have this service. I believe that if you continue with this idea, it will be a total success.
Once again I want to say that I think your business idea is a great addition for Gainesville. One criticism that I have is that you introduced your name. I remember from lectures that it wasn't a good idea to do that since we already know who you are. That being said, I did the same thing and only realized this after the fact. Other than that, good explanation of your concept and putting the viewer into the shoes of a customer.
Hello Kasey, I can say that I'm one of those persons who gets tickets often, and my bike was stolen 3 years ago. This is why I agree with you that this is a good idea. The idea of suing an app to access the bike is time-saving and easy. Overall, great job again, this is a truly innovative idea.
ReplyDeleteHi Kasey - I hope you are well! You did a great job on this assignment - it is always interesting to put a name to the words on your blog! I thought you did a great job on your elevator pitch - the bike idea is super useful and would help out a lot of students on campus. I know that I always wish I had a bike - and I love the idea of the convenience. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteKasey, I believe you elevator pitch was good. You introduced yourself and provided different situations where most of students have been in. As I said in previous posts, your idea delivers efficiency and convenience to all people and I am also shocked that the University of Florida does not have this service. I believe that if you continue with this idea, it will be a total success.
ReplyDeleteOnce again I want to say that I think your business idea is a great addition for Gainesville. One criticism that I have is that you introduced your name. I remember from lectures that it wasn't a good idea to do that since we already know who you are. That being said, I did the same thing and only realized this after the fact. Other than that, good explanation of your concept and putting the viewer into the shoes of a customer.
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