22A: Elevator Pitch No. 3
Reflection:
If I'm being entirely honest, this is my same elevator pitch as elevator pitch number two. Out of all the feedback I received, there was nothing that was deemed necessary to change, and I honestly don't think that there was anything to change. My feedback from my peers was positive, and I fixed any problems from Elevator Pitch One to Elevator Pitch Two. I honestly don't think anything would have changed between my second elevator pitch to my third. My second elevator pitch was practically memorized, I spoke clearly, I didn't introduce myself, I stated the problem, fixed the problem, it came out exactly as I wanted it. That is all, I hope you all enjoy even though most of you peer reviewing me shouldn't even need to watch it again being that it's the same.
Hello once again Kasey, I have to say that I saw all of your elevator pitches and its true that there were not much you could change to improve it since I think they were pretty good. Me as well had only positive feedback comments so I didn't change much rather in my last elevator pitch. This being said, I think you have done a great job on both elevator pitches.
ReplyDeleteKasey, I believe you did a great improvement from your first elevator pitch to your second one that it wasn't necessary to add a third one. As you said, you memorized your second elevator pitch and stated the problem as well as the solution. In addition to that, you were more concise which made your second elevator pitch much better.
ReplyDeleteHi Kasey - I hope you are doing well, and that you had a nice weekend. I thought you did a great job on your second elevator pitch, and see why you did not create another one. I agree with the other comments (and your personal feedback) that there is not much you could have changed to improve it. Hopefully you will be able to use it one day! Best of luck, and I hope you have a great day.
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